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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9047
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I always agree that travelling on the road is makes our much more meaningful. many years ago, when I was young, I like move around with my father by his truck, because the world in my eyes is amazing. we are the smallest units of the universal, and our life's width can be extend if we can walk outside our surroundings and get into the wild or market. You can either travel or read,but either your body or soul must be on the way.

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