文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;请注意分段。
I always agree that travelling on the road is makes our much more meaningful. many years ago, when I was young, I like move around with my father by his truck, because the world in my eyes is amazing. we are the smallest units of the universal, and our life's width can be extend if we can walk outside our surroundings and get into the wild or market. You can either travel or read,but either your body or soul must be on the way.