小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化。

I have a girl friend,she is very beauty.And better than all, there were young, softly rounded cheeks and bright eyes. She has a kind heart, we are known each other from our child.Every day I go to her home and her mommy do all kind of food to us.we laughed when we were eating all kind of taste. We are good friends and we talk everything about our love vie，value veiw and so on... But as time goes on we grew.Our think happen change