2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

With the increasingly development of the sciences and technology, package plays an important roles in our daily life.Nowadays, It is ordinary for many goods to package excessively. Why has appeared an economone? The reasons are as follows: Firstly, many person enjoy a brillantly quality life,so the companies can spend lots of time devise stuffs' package to attack audence.Secondly, with the advance development of technology, It finds that all kinds of packages are produced by desirers' innovation. What's more, It is worthwhile of stuffs to package, person perfer to buy it. In my points of it, I am not favor of it, because I attach great importance to stuff'qulity. Importantly, If the stories spend lots of energy ang time desire the packages, they will ignore the qulity. So I think that it is fault for stuffs to package excessively,we should be committed to qulity,reducing to package.