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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5734
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分89.5分
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

With the advent of the information era, people are confronting a dilemma that "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." It is common that nag advertisements and irrelevant things pours into our screen when we go on line. Many a time, people will easily deviate from the core they intend to search. Nowadays, people usually resort to the search engine for material that will come in handy in their work or lesson. As soon as one type a key word countless items emerge, which even relates to commercial or entertaining purpose. Furthermore, these IT companies have been promoting skillful campaign to seize people's attention with fancy words and delightful content, in order to expand their virtual territory. Consequently, the implements like computer or database, suppose to facilitate our task, in the contrary dampen our efficiency. However some external help will be of use in some circumstances, like a database on a specific domain, or definite "key phrase" rather than vague "key word" that will narrow the range of information. It is also recommended to become a premium subscriber to some data agent to get rid of the ads and enjoy the customized service. In these ways, we can be more efficient without distracting by irrelevant information.

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