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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达过于贫乏，学术词汇进步空间很大，拼写错误稍多；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。
in recest years ,with the electronic fast development,more and more people communicate with somebody in the internet. in my view,communicate of the internet have advantage but it also has a disadvantage, nowadays,electronic communicate more and more popular,why electronic communicate can replace face to face contact?this fowlling can spout this view,firstly,electronic communicate is vare convince contact people,and then,electronic communicate is fast contact people so on.
