中考考前作文集中训练附范文18:如何保持健康

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Today is June 11th,Thursday.There are only 15 days to end my first year in the university.Time is so fast like watering.I just want to hold it tender but olny regret left in my hands.I break my promise again for not writing anymore.I am busy in finding a holiday.I found a job which seemed to be good.However ,the fact was I was cheated.Luckily,a strange person reminded me.I am trying to find a job which can provide a good weafare.I won't lose my confidence in spite of difficlity.