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2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:28浏览次数:1055
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重 
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害 
3. 我们应该怎么做
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

It is extremely universal for pirated products,which almost everywhere spread the pirated one.Hardly do not we know why there are mass pirated products.the reasons are fallowing. First of all,I think,earning money is most main reason. Pirating others products is much easier to make money than those creating the products,which lead most people to pursuing it.The company do not need to spend a large number of money to technolony,which means low cost and more incomes .What's more,the other reason is the negligence of government.Our government do not look into these companies that pirate others' products,causing that the law of our country is not so powerful that every criminal afraid of no.It cause the tort to intellectual property ,which would lead the resentment in society. What we should do is that do not purchase the pirated products and hold on the opinion against the pirated.Moving on the way to oppose the pirated one

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