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It is extremely universal for pirated products,which almost everywhere spread the pirated one.Hardly do not we know why there are mass pirated products.The reasons are fallowing. First of all,I think,earning money is most main reason. Pirating others products is much easier to make money than those inventing the products,which leads most people to pursuing it.The company does not need to spend a marvelous number of money to technology,which means lower cost and more incomes .What's more,the other reason is the negligence of government.Our government does not look into these companies that pirate others' products,causing that the law of our country is not so powerful that every criminal would be afraid of nothing.It indirectly allows the tort to intellectual property ,which would lead the resentment in society. What we should do is that do not purchase pirated products and hold on the opinion against the pirated.Moving on the way to oppose the pirated one is our missions.
