作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;熟练使用了一些长难句;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Hello, everyone,welcome to China, now I am your guide, and from now on, I shall lead you to visit the marvelous scenery of this country. Next, our scheme is go to a waterfall which named Huangguoshu, it's a famous resort in the world, most of the foreign tourists usually visits there when they comes Guizhou Province.At 8:00 A.M, we depart, 9:00,we arrive, after 3 hours trip, we could have our lunch in a restaurant nearby, after lunch, we're going to have a rest for 30 minutes, then we continue our activities, at 18:00, we back this place and have a meal. That's all, Any question?
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