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2004年6月英语四级作文真题:旅游向导

发布时间:2013-05-16 19:02浏览次数:1158
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include: 
● some welcoming words   
● the schedule for the day    
● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)   
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.  
用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;熟练使用了一些长难句;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

Hello, everyone,welcome to China, now I am your guide, and from now on, I shall lead you to visit the marvelous scenery of this country. Next, our scheme is go to a waterfall which named Huangguoshu, it's a famous resort in the world, most of the foreign tourists usually visits there when they comes Guizhou Province.At 8:00 A.M, we depart, 9:00,we arrive, after 3 hours trip, we could have our lunch in a restaurant nearby, after lunch, we're going to have a rest for 30 minutes, then we continue our activities, at 18:00, we back this place and have a meal. That's all, Any question?

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