2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇表达丰富多彩，但是要留意单词拼写；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

It is universally acknowleged that in the ever changing 21st century,especiall in some metropolises,the quality of people`s living standard stamps a reversed trend with the development of economy--a dramatic reduction.Just as an old saying has it that technology acts like an two-edged sword and the users may be hurted without prudence and indiscretion.All in all,there are some main reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly ,just as the idiom above,people nowadays blindly pursuing the development and prosperity and ignoring copious elements which are extrordinary significant for our land,pollution and ecosystem`s destruction for instance.Think about the boring frog sky you have to overwhelm,and dirty collar when you back home.Secondly,the unbalance of cities`s blossom and the gap between people lead to too crowded for metropolises,everyday`s subway seem like squeezing meat cans and the prcious holiday gradually become "diversion in home".Thirdly,the consequence of large stride of evolution of society is more and more anxious and pressure for people,they sacrifices their rest time to work and become vulnerable and feeble. The solution of this may mainly throw these approches:sharing no effort to develop green-tech innovations for the sake of deceasing pollution and achieve more enviromental protection;highlighting the healthy awareness of people and letting them aquaire the overwork`s hazards;providing more facilitis and instrument by public badget for people to alleviate their living standards.I accept that my perspectives may be open to challenge and potential modification and refutation by friends insisit various values.