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2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:28浏览次数:1055[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重 
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害 
3. 我们应该怎么做
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

用户练习作文:

say no to pirate products Phenomenon of pirated products has worked like crazy, which has extended a rang of domains ,such as literature , electric products and etc. The grieving situation can entail many unfavorable consequences . in fact, it is dishonest and speculation that render the piracy as some people are more apt to attain profit without paying enormous effort than struggling to innovate new one. yet, the serious out come are hardly token into account . firstly, customers are expose to deciet and have a significant impact on business moral deterioration. meanwhile , it is potential to discourage creativity and positivity which play critical role in our technology improvement,so that piracy would spell doom. a critical step that can prevent from piracy is to devise and implement efficient law as well as to raise people awareness of intellect property. only this way can we welcome splendid-shining healthy market future.

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