题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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I am a good boy! how old are you? i am fine , thank you very much. As the contemporary society develops dramatically, a worrying problem has sprung up that the degree of trust among individuals has decreased.For example, when we meet a man begging for money due to his handicapped leg in the street, we are considering whether he is cheating us.