Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;请注意分段。
In the visual picture,there were two people starting into the computer.The most attractive characterisit is the people is typing in the computer.The picture tells us the parents take care their children so much. Several aspects lead to the matter, blind my eyes,that if the parents can typing in computer,they will take care their children regular ,the children will grow up healthly.My grandfather ,who worked the famous university said:''health is of importance.'' In my opinion ,I think it is well of the parents can typing in computer,they can taketheir children more .Govermonent ,I hold ,had better take measures to keep this condition in a right way.