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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

In the visual cartoon,there were two persons starting into the computer.The most attractive characteristic is the person is typing in the computer.The cartoon tells us the parents take care their children so much. Several aspects lead to the matter, blind my eyes,that if the parents can typing in computer,they will take care their children regular ,the children will grow up healthly.My grandfather ,who worked the famous university said:''health is of importance.'' In my opinion ,I think it is well of the parents can typing in computer,they can taketheir children more .Govermonent ,I hold ,had better take measures to keep this condition in a right way.

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