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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；加强局势的变化，会取得更好的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
As we all known,life is not forever.so we should cherich it .what's more,it is very important to make our life more meaningful,therefore we will not feel pity. In my university life,many classmates take their time on playing computer games instead of studying or joining school activities.I think this action is not respect to their life,and I will not like them to waste life time.To let my life more meaningful,I should make good use of my time to do something important for people and our city. In a word,our life is so treasure that we should use it more careful.In the meantime,we all try our best to get our life more wonderful.
