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熟练使用了一些长难句；文中衔接词丰富；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。
A meaningful life In a morden society, people chase the more meaningful life,they do not satisfied with the food clothes and so on. In my opinion,a human that love challenge in his life, always have a positive attiditude to his life,and smile to the failure.That will give him a foundation for his future. A man can though reading book to improve his view, let him kown he's disadvantage, he can change his mind by read other's story,the other thing can make one's life evolute in a other field is to change yourself, from any tiny thing,the figure of walking or get up early,though it can't take any honor to us, it means the mind that we want to say goodbye to our old time,finally the sunshine will come to us.
