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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11301
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达灵活多样,可是学术词汇使用较少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,it's very common that people use the mobile phone in their daily life.But this phenomenon goes from bad to worse,just like the picture says that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sticks in order to see. Why there are so many people can't live without mobile phone? As far as I am concerned,on the one hand,with the development of technology,more and more people benefit from them.On the other hand,not only cell phone can call your friends,making each other closely,but also you can surf Internet that can boarden our horizon,even we stay at home ,still don't be out. However,cell phone is a double-edged sword.Actually it is convenient for our life,but if we rely on it seriously,it'll make we human beings become the severnt for technology.A sentence spreed that the most far distant in the world isn't death,is I sit in the front of you,but you are playing cell phone.So,don't do that right now.

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