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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

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要求：: Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中衔接词丰富；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；请注意分段。

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Never before has so much controversy been aroused concerning the life quality of modern city dwellers .People’s towards this issue vary greatly with their perspectives of view it. Personally,I reckon that although lots of problems still exist in current life,we have been enjoying an ever-improving life.With the combined efforts made by people from all walks of life,we will definitely enjoy a more promising future.

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