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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4832
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中学术词汇使用较丰富,但请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。

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Never before has so much controversy been aroused concerning the life quality of modern city dwellers .People’s attitudes towards this issue vary greatly with their perspectives of view it. Personally,I reckon that although lots of problems still exist in current life,we have been enjoying an ever-improving life.With the combined efforts made by people from all walks of life,we will definitely enjoy a more promising future. Never before has so much controversy been aroused concerning the life quality of modern city dwellers .People’s attitudes towards this issue vary greatly with their perspectives of view it. Personally,I reckon that although lots of problems still exist in current life,we have been enjoying an ever-improving life.With the combined efforts made by people from all walks of life,we will definitely enjoy a more promising future. Never before has so much controversy been aroused concerning the life quality of modern city dwellers .People’s attitudes towards this issue vary greatly with their perspectives of view it. Personally,I reckon that although lots of problems still exist in current life,we have been enjoying an ever-improving life.With the combined efforts made by people from all walks of life,we will definitely enjoy a more promising future. Never before has so much controversy been aroused concerning the life quality of modern city dwellers .People’s attitudes towards this issue vary greatly with their perspectives of view it.

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