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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9023
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。

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There is a saying goes:"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." Ironically enough,how many people on earth know how to spend their life?They drown themselves in drugs,they committed crime .Actually ,what they have already done is just to shorten their invaluable life. As far as I am concerned,to lead a meaningful life is to follow the voice from the bottom of your heart.It is advised to do something you really like right here right now,namely,painting,music,travelling and so on.I still can remember when I had an interview,I was asked :"what do you think you have done during the year is meaningful?"I said:"The most meaningful thing I have done this year is to distinguish which matter is really meaningful." My dear friends,you may well weigh the pros and cons of so many things waiting to be done,and choose what you really love and live better life.

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