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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9033
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中拼写错误有点多了;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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As is vividly shown in the picture,there have a title that "QUIZ TODAY"And a student ask to teacher "Once I learn how to use Google,is not that all the education I really need?" With rapid social and economic development,interent is inceasinly become a necessary in our everday life.We not only can paly game and shopping ,but also can study.The most of school provid computers in order to student learning.No garden has no weeds.Learning. online can broaden our horizons and increase our knowledge.And then it is also likly to help our find informations quickly and conveniently.However,some students can not resist the temptation and look through bad .There also have people who spread engative throughts online.Therefore,how does thacher do? As we all know,education does not simply mean learn to obtain information.Teacher ought to guide student to set up a right values.In addition,teacher should teach them what is right on the interent and also in the life.Only in this way,student can improve their ability and make contribution to society.

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