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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

As the society as develop so fast, the highly developing technology make the communication mode become more and more convenience and shortcut. If the people want to meet with each other between the friends, they can open the internet to communicate with each other. Although the communication of internet is very convenient, it can not replace face-to-face contact. For example, there are many student go abroad to study. So they can't often go back to their family. Though the internet meeting can solve the suffering of the suffering of the missing. It can't replace their parents's eagerness which can have a face-to-face contact with their children. The face-to-face contact can make us to life in a real word and touch the real feeling of happiness,sadness and pain. In a words, communicating in the internet is very convenience. But we shouldn't make us lacking in real feeling.

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