中考考前作文集中训练附范文20:网上交友

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Is making friends online bad or good? With the development of the Internet, more and more people begin to enjoy making friends online. It is true that making friends online helps us a lot because it can make us have more friends. The more friends we have, the more information we can get and the better we can know the world. What’s more, we can have more people to share our happiness and sadness. On the other hand, making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, too. There have been many people who are cheated online. So I think making friends online is helpful, but we must be careful.