高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past,my hometown had a lot of trees.The fish play in the clear river.Even if the building were small and the streets were duty ,we are happy and love our life. But now ,so much car in the road are polluted air.Developing the industry,environmental deterioration are more seriously .Even more unfortunately,the tree where in forest are less and less.The fish in the river are disappear.In my opinion ,a pressing matter of the moment is to protect the environment and pollution control.Let us act together.