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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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学术词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;可适当增加从句的使用,注意几处句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

given is a simple but thought-provoking picture which illruates this scene:a pair parent ,writting a e-mail to their son .are looking forward to seeing him.however,the boy is palying computer day and night. this picture can be naturaly assicated with the impacts of internet on the way people communicate.in contemporary society,an increasing number of individuals hold the view that electronic communication play an importance role in our daily life.without as a matter of fact,it is impossible that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.without the face-to-face contact,we can not gain the trust between others,feel others directly and enhance the harmonious society.fortunately,an increasing number of individuals have come to realize the significance of that electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact. as for a youngster,we must educate advocate and encourage our friend classmates and acquaintances that electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact.do bear in mind:electronic product is just a tool.

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