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单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。
It is know to us all that life is important ,but how we spend it is more important. It is said that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. It is true that live meanly is more important than just live without doing anything.we will be boring if we just eat and sleep.We should work, study hard ,play some games to make our life more colorful .We need to do more for the society and donate us to the society.Then we can make people live happy and give some meanly to us. We need to outlast our life rather than to be free.So,do something right now.
