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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
请作者在词汇丰富度，尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉；文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
As everyone knows that internet is become more and more important.So many people chat in line. with the developement of science and technology,moer and moer people consider that computer is necessary.Family can communication on internet.On one hand,an advantage of chat on line is that save money.On the other hand,much word can be said that sometimes feel shy so didn't said.That can improve family communicate.Not only can chat on line ,but also ,it is important to us that shopping on line.It can help many poeple buy some thing ,and people don't need to go out.That can save time. In my opinion,internet is necessary to us.It does play an important role.
