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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

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Now,it is generally accepted that phones plays an important part in people's lives. As is shown in picture, people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see, especially youngsters. there are the following reasons for this phenomenon. One main part of the reason is that people need to keep up with each other, including family, friends, colleagues, etc. The other main reason is that the function of the mobile phone is getting stronger and stronger, people can scan news, listen to the music, see a movie, surf the Internet through the smart phone. Finally, with the rapid development of science and technology and economy, the phone become more and more cheaper, lead to almost all people can purchase the mobile phone. As far as i am concerned, the advantages od mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages of it as long as we don't interfere with others while using it.

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