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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22881
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。

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I used to live a beautiful small town with green trees all around it. The river, running through the town, have a clear water it which a fish could be see swiming in groups. The house, however, were small and single and the street wasn't wide enough to run cars. People here worked hard all year around yet lived a life of more than poverty. Now great change have take place here. You can see tall building, departments stores and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in borad street. But with the development of industry, pollution is becoming more and more serious. To our joy, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the town even more beautiful.

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