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23th,Dec.2008 Dear Mr.Johnson, We have receivead the 3,000 products from your company in 22th,December.According to our signing of the No.35 order.The products should be have 3,500 and the other 500 products that we have been not receive by the time.Please check your product list. We are loking forword to your early replay.