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From:wanghaiming@hotmail.com Date:23th,Dec.2008 To:sales-department@hotmail.com Subjuet:Please check your product liat.We have received the 3,000 products from your company on 22nd,December.But according to our signing of the No.35 order the number of 3,500 we does not receive the other 500 of the products.Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early replay.