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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;复杂句采用很棒;文中衔接词丰富;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

From this picture we can see two desperate parents are sitting in front of the computer,the father is typing a piece of message for their lovely daughter .As the words below this picture illustrates ,they haven't seen their daughter for many days ,because the lovely little girl has been buried up in the computer games for a long time ,and she haven't eaten anything upstairs.It worries her parents so much.As the booming of the modern technology ,computers has taken up most of people's time,it makes the communication among people easier and offers a lot of resources for people'daily work,but in the same time ,it also brings many troubles to people's normal life. Nowadays, advanced technology products like computers has largely changed the way people communicate.They can talk with their friends,parents,relatives and even strangers by computer,it is convenient,but it makes them can not talk face to face and it broaden the distance of people.It allows the personal space of them but makes them away from the real life.It has shortages and advantages,we should weigh the pros and cons and take the most benefits of it.

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