Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
As is shown in the picture,a couple of parents sit down the computer.They are communicating with their son.Following socity developing,more and more people communicate each other by internet replaceing face-to-face.For my part,I don't think this is a good way. To begin with,people contact with face-to-face is much better than electronic communication.This way is belifect to acess to parents-child relationship.In addition,face-to-face contact is a good display of real emotion.Last but least,face-to-face contact can eliminate distuct between parents and children. In total,the internet has great influenced the ways of communction,but it can never replace face-to-face contact.