2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

With the time going, the level of techonolgy on internet development with a higher speed, like anything alse, it has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefit of it can be listed as follows.In the first place, we can use it keep in touch with the people who we missed but not together now.In the second place, we can also know more information of the world,like news.Finally,we can use it to amuse ourselves too. While the nagetive of using it also obvious.Firstly,with the number of using cell phone people were incresingly fast,there were many people fall into it. Some people walke watching phone ,sit before desks using phone and even eating with playing it ,it's so bad, we must over it,we need,first of all, foster people's awarness of the importants of balance the really life and using phone,then we need to find some way to help them stop using them often , maybe it's a hard work,but it is of critical important. In conclusion.Once you balance the really life and using phone,you will have a happy life.