Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education Pays The bar chart given by US Bureau of labor Statistics the unemployment rate and Median weekly earning in 2011 among people with different educational background. From these statistics,it can be seen more high education the unemployment rate more low,but the median weekly earnings more high. Generally speaking, this phenomenon has two reasons. One side, the technology development more and more quickly in industrial and lead to the workforce with higher educational degree. Therefore, it is natural for people with higher educational degree to enjoy a more high income and well paid job. On the other hand, those with lower education degrees people find work was very difficult and their jobs usually feature low skill which can be done by almost anybody, so that their low income in the work. In my opinion, it is to find that education is always a worthy investment. Because high education can bring our rich the wealth and import our to qualities. First, we require important to our education. Second, the government should make sure everyone can study and accept to fair education. Encourage to students promote themselves.