2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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With the time going, the level of technology on internet development with a higher speed, like anything else, it has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefit of it can be listed as follows.In the first place, we can use it to keep in touch with the people we missed but not together now.In the second place, we can also know more information of the world,like news.Finally,we can use it to amuse ourselves too. While the negative of using it also obvious.Firstly,with the number of using cell phone people were increasingly fast,there were many people fall into it. Some people walk watching phone ,sit before desks using the phone and even eating with playing it ,it's so bad, we must over it,we need,first of all, foster people's awarness of the importants of balance the really life and using phone,then we need to find some way to help them stop using them often, maybe it's a hard job,but it is of critical important. In a conclusion.Once you balance the really life and using phone,you will have a happy life.