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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11298
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the time going, the level of technology on internet development with a higher speed, like anything else, it has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefit can be listed as follows.In the first place, we can use it to keep in touch with the people we missed but not together now.In the second place, we can also know more information of the world,like news.Finally,we can use it to amuse ourselves too. While the negative of using it also obvious.Firstly,with the number of using cell phone people were increasingly fast,there were many people fall into it. Some people walk watching phone ,sit before desks using the phone and even eating with playing it,it's so bad, we must over it,we need,first of all, foster people's awareness of the importance of balance the really life and using phone,then we need to find some way to help them stop using them often, maybe it's a hard job,but it is of critical important. In conclusion,once you balance the really life and using phone,you will have a happy life.

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