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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1952
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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How to improve student's mental health ` With more and more challengs around our life,the students are need to learn a large of skills to adapt it.In this situation,student's mental health has become important than before.They need have a good mood to face the obstacles happend to them. To improve student's mental health,we can set out from these forms.First of all,they should learn to relax.As the old saying goes,"All work,no play makes jack a dull boy".Acorrding,we can understand the importance of the students'mental health.Secondly, at ordinary times,the parents and school should guide them to have a positive attitude.Thirdly,the social need to creat a atmosphere to led students learn the important of the mental health.Finally,when facing sad thing,having a negative mood,we can ask our friend for help. A excellent mental health will made our life more enjouable,that is to say,it can add color to the dull routine of every day life.

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