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How to improve student's mental health ` With more and more challengs around our life,the students are need to learn a large of skills to adapt it.In this situation,student's mental health has become important than before.They need have a good mood to face the obstacles happend to them. To improve student's mental health,we can set out from these forms.First of all,they should learn to relax.As the old saying goes,"All work,no play makes jack a dull boy".Acorrding,we can understand the importance of the students'mental health.Secondly, at ordinary times,the parents and school should guide them to have a positive attitude.Thirdly,the social need to creat a atmosphere to led students learn the important of the mental health.Finally,when facing sad thing,having a negative mood,we can ask our friend for help. A excellent mental health will made our life more enjouable,that is to say,it can add color to the dull routine of every day life.