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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练地使用学术词汇，但词汇丰富度总体不足；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
From the picture and dialogue,we know that the network makes the great role in communicate with the parents .This have problem whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. Many people hold the opinion that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.They shows evidence to prove their ideas .More and more people love to use internet to communicate with friends and parents . Face-to-face contact is not useful for us.this way wastes more time and boring to us . others have diffrent views to this problem .Face-to-face contacting which is a way to communicate with friends and perents is more important to us in our daily life.this can increase feeling with others in surrounding As far as i am considered we should make full use of internet to communicate with others .
