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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Happiness is the key to sucess,an attitude to your life,and many people always says the lack of happiness in their life.Why so many people have the same opinion? In the original society people share the food they hunted,there is no competence in their family.with the development of human's evolution,the balance of the fair was broken,the man who has the ability to achieve a higher equlity of life,they got so much treasure and jewlery,that make some lazy man complaint the unfair of society. Everyone wants to be an honorable man to live in nice enviorment,but the source is limit.If you want to be a lucky guy have happiness life, what you need to do is change yourself,in another mind to think about your life,then you will enter a new world.
