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【题目要求】
People are frequently confronted with huge amounts of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think the advertising industry exerts an influence upon people’s lives? And what measures could be adopted to counter the risk of the disastrous effects?
【题目翻译】
应对竞争，不同公司打出各式各样的广告，霎时间，铺天盖地的广告向人们席卷而来!
广告在多大程度上影响了人们的生活?应该采取哪些措施应对广告所带来的不良影响?
【题目关键词】
advertisements; exert an influence upon; adopt measures
【写作小贴士】
此类题目是典型的blended essay的写法，开头结尾相对容易，body paragraphs分为两段展开，按照题目提问的先后顺序：首先，第一问可以写广告所带来的诸多benefits，比如：广告让我们更加清晰了解产品特点getting a better understanding of how the products work;成为大多数企业的收入来源sources of revenue;部分广告向人们宣传健康生活方式，让人们生活更加幸福快乐more contented。当然也可以写drawbacks，例如：很多商业广告的虚假宣传误导了消费者消费misleading customers;部分广告内容低俗，对青少年的身心发展不利negative effects on mental health;广告泛滥使广告形象大打折扣contribute to a bad self-image。其次，针对问题提出解决的solutions，这里可以从政府的角度切入，广告利弊兼有，政府应当积极引导，以便广告更好地服务于民众。
【写作语汇一览表】
1.in response to an advertisement回应广告
2.commercials商业广告
3.informative传递信息
4.hooks圈套
5.tricks and catchy phrases花言巧语
6.Advertising is now a circus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。
7.be immune to the influence of advertising不受广告的影响
8.subtle不易察觉
9.a great variety of beautiful products玲琅满目的商品
【写作例句推荐】
1. The effect advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us remain unaware of how it molds us to fill in the particular company’s needs.
2.While advertising is useful for a host of things, from selling products, to putting public announcements on the air, some of the effects are detrimental as they can intentionally misrepresent “real” people in their commercials.
建议作者多用些学术词汇，同时注意个别拼写错误；从句使用量稍显不足；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
It is universally acknowledged that following the tremendous advancement of mass media,advertisements` development has receiving a overwhelming trends than ever before.On the streets,TVs,websites...nearly every corner of public places,advertisements are haunting around us.It is not exaggerate to say that advertisements have bringing various advantages for our lives.However,some negetive effections brought by it should also induce our enough caution. Since the advertisements`appearence,the giant changes to our society are obvious to all.It can bring us more details and provide us more conprehensive realizations about productions.Its gigantic functions can bring a common commdity to be a omnipotent artifact which may make big benifits for corporation.Forthermore,advertisements` development is also the main essence of the advancement of commerce.And few of businessman use some nasty contents to attract people`s notice meanwhile pose great bad effections for juveniles and children. In my perspective ,advertisements acts like an two-edged sword which may hurt its users without prudence and discretions.We should share no efforts to magnify its merits and avoid its disadvantages.The key solution must be the pubilishment of provisons which can effectively regulate advertisements`market,perscript its contents and make sure its legality.Meanwhile ,the awareness of traders should be augmented and nation`s macro-policies need to be refined. On the other hand,the fierce competition of advertisements` market sometimes leads to virulent results.Some merchants eject fake informations into their advertisement and misleading consumers` judgement and even cause actual hazardous to people`s health.
