2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努��。

overusing phone AS we can see here and there,people who are in the rapid blossom of morden technology full of happiness while their hands hold a phone. Forefirst, a phone can build a bridge between oneself and one's concern person.besids,when boring,it's a great method to play certain a game.Last but not least,morden phone have a gaint function,that is surfing internet.Not only can we deal with some thing,but to study by the affluent resource from internet. Neverthless, there are some defects on a parent basis.It's common to meet one crossing the road with lower one's hand due to a phone and walking sticks so as to see it.that's so dangerous that some valid measures should be taken such as goverment accorate puting down phone on proper occasion.It's high time to teasure oueselves body and safe.