2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。

Overusing phone AS we can see here and there,people who are in the blossom of morden technology full of happiness while their hands hold a phone. Forefirst, a phone can build a bridge between oneself and one's concern person.Besides,when you feel boring,it's a great idea to play a relaxing game.Last but not least,mordern phone have a giant function,that is surfing the internet.Not only can we deal with some things,but to study by the affluent resources from internet. Neverthless, there are some defects on a parent basis.It's common to meet one crossing the road with lower one's hand due to a phone and walking sticks so as to see it.That's so dangerous that some valid measures should be taken such as goverment accorate putting down phone on proper occasion.It's high time to teasure oueselves body and safety.