2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Overusing phone AS we can see here and there,people who are in the blossom of morden technology full of happiness while their hands hold a phone. Forefirst, a phone can build a bridge between oneself and one's concern person.Besides,when you feel boring,it's a great idea to play a relaxing game.Last but not least,modern phone have a giant function,which is surfing the internet.Not only can we deal with some things,but to study by the affluent resources from the internet. Neverthless, there are some defects on a parent basis.It's common to meet one crossing the road with lower one's hand due to a phone and walking sticks so as to see it.That's so dangerous that some valid measures should be taken such as goverment accorate putting down phone on proper occasion.What is completely we can draw that it's high time to treasure ourselves body and safety.