2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the soicety divelopped,more and more peple like going shopping on internet .I think that wegoing shopping on internet can cost litter time and we can use this time do other things.So more and more pepel love it.But i think it have any bad thing,either.Sometimes going shopping is a best way to comunite with good friends and parents. I thing we should use different way to go shopping.There is happiness on everwhere .