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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com Date:June.14th,2014 To:KPOHsales@hotmall.com Subject:To establish business relationships Dear sir or madam During the exhibition which was held at New Yort from dec.12th to 15th,I learn of your conpany's new product,namely number of 5670,in which I have been intrestered a lot.Now,I ask your conpany for a prize list and instrution.I will extremely be grateful for you and hope to establish business relationships each other soonly. We are looking foreword to your early apply. Yours sincerely, Hubin.
