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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。
From:hubin@163.com. Date:June.14th,2014 To:KPOHsales@hotmall.com. Subject:To establish business relationships. Dear sir or madam During the exhibition which was held at New Yort from dec.12th to 15th,I learn of your conpany's new product,namely number of 5670,in which I have been intrested a lot.Now,I ask your conpany for a prize list and instruction.I will be grateful for you and hope to establish business relationships each other as soon asposible. We are looking foreword to your early apply. Yours sincerely, Hubin.
