2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；请注意分段。

Nowadays,men have a close relationship with computer ,like a friends who give us help in our work ,or make us happy when we in upset.everyday,we use computer,and the most interesting thing is surfing on the Internet ,we get news from our city ,country ,and all over the world at one time,and not have to go outside.Honestly,the development of our society has already connected to computers' develop. but there are not only benefit but also many problems in computer using,more and more people who know computer professional but they do not us it in correct way,they broke the computer systems and make computer bacteria in,some of them even steal users' profile and make benefit of themselves.it really bothers people's daily life .