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The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication As the modern society develops dramatically, the internet on interpersonal communication has become part of us to survive. The reason why i am saying that is we do every thing depend on interpersonal relationships,go school,see doctor,in career.Internet on interpersonal communication not only contributes greatly to making life convienient,but the effects can spread generation to generation,which is desirable.So we must build a brilliant,useful internet of that.Besides,we know life is a mirror,so we communicate with good guys,we will be closer to be a succeed man.Last but not least,if you do not want to somebody rain on your Parada,you would be pleasure you have a good internet on interpersonal communication. in conclusion,the internet on interpersonal communication is the artry of our life.
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