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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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熟练使用了一些长难句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者能较多样地使用词汇,学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication As the modern society develops dramatically, the internet on interpersonal communication has become part of us to survive. The reason why i am saying that is we do every thing depend on interpersonal relationships,go school,see doctor,in career.Internet on interpersonal communication not only contributes greatly to making life convienient,but the effects can spread generation to generation,which is desirable.So we must build a brilliant,useful internet of that.Besides,we know life is a mirror,so we communicate with good guys,we will be closer to be a succeed man.Last but not least,if you do not want to somebody rain on your Parada,you would be pleasure you have a good internet on interpersonal communication. in conclusion,the internet on interpersonal communication is the artry of our life.

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