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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
要求:
题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

some people consider name is very critical to their daily lives, as name could be a symbol to conveniently represent something that would be difficult to describe in several words. And they consider that name could also be used in effective communication and thinking. some historic name could remind people of some meaningful memories. at the same time, the other people think name is unimportant. they may thought name is just a tool to communicate. a man strong should be powerful enough to get rid of the relying of tools. and they may be confused by some names that didn't represent the correct associations. i think name is quite important in some serious domains such as countries and history. however, the abuse of name would make difficulty in communication or cause bad effect on associations.

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